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Post by Envy Mon 07 Jun 2010, 10:47 pm

Well, in class we have to make a poem a week, and it can be about anything, and you just need èproof that you wrote it, so you dont have to turn it in. This week's I wanted to do it about TH.

The Hunterz is a family.
When I see the Streak of red,
on that euro server, I think
The Hunterz is a community.
When I hear Bob Marley's voice,
on Adam's TS, I think that
The Hunterz is a happy place.
When I talk about Apps with people,
I know that The Hunterz is a smart clan.
When I ask a question, I know Nero will be there,
When I am surrounded by preds, I know Rumo will be there.
When I am talking of skills, I know a behe hamer will be there.
And when I talk of Savage, I know that
The Hunterz Will Be There.

Hope you like.
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Post by Tushaar Mon 07 Jun 2010, 11:16 pm

Very Creative poem! But i don't understand, do you have to show it to your teacher? Razz
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Post by xaron Mon 07 Jun 2010, 11:19 pm

really good poem. i like it Smile

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Post by Adam Shootyperson Tue 08 Jun 2010, 1:50 am

Hahaha Nice mate! =DAwesome 5/5


Thanks for mencioning my name xD
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Post by DieOrFail Tue 08 Jun 2010, 2:19 am

Yeh, really nice! Good job, ENVY! Smile
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Post by Rumo Tue 08 Jun 2010, 4:59 am

=D Good job! But don´t show it to your class, they will think you´re a nerd xD
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Post by Envy Tue 08 Jun 2010, 6:56 am

What I meant is you just need a signiture (from a parent) that you have written a poem. Nobody has to read it except you. All that the the teacher wants is that a poem was written. He says it's for keeping our writing skills sharp during the year. most have been about my RL and family, such as my dog Kayoosh (TN knows about him) my photography hobby, and other stuff. Thanks for the nice comments Smile
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Post by DieOrFail Tue 08 Jun 2010, 7:02 am

Well, thanks for the nice poem!
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Post by Moon1ight Tue 08 Jun 2010, 7:09 am

Wohoo, now this is a good one. Nice ideas and an interesting style of poetry, not like the standard forms of rhymes.
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Post by TNaismith Tue 08 Jun 2010, 2:52 pm

b(^.^)b I have to say this is the first poem I've ever read to be about an online gaming clan/community! (If I have read some before, I don't remember any right now xD)

And indeed, the style of your poem and rhymes are very different Envy, but at the same time it makes the piece very unique and fun to read. It definitely caused a reaction of pride and brought a smile to my face when reading the poem. =)

And also about what your teacher said Envy -- about him giving you this writing project to keep your writing sharp for the year -- even though he won't even be reading this poem, that (in my opinion) is a huge part of what writing is about. The same with how if you want to understand english better, you keep on doing things like reading books in english, the same goes for writing; If you want to become a better writer, then writing is how do it.

I think there is a quote I read for this...

"Writing begets writing."

I tried to search for the exact quote on google but I didn't get the results I wanted. I did find this article though: http://www.writersstore.com/article.php?articles_id=35. There is a section about 'Writing begets writing', and I found it interesting to read. Might be interesting for you Envy =), or anyone interesting in writing for that matter. ^.^

http://www.writersstore.com/article.php?articles_id=35
The Three Cosmic Rules of Writing wrote:
. . . Which brings me to the Third (and, thankfully, last) Cosmic Rule of Writing...namely, 'Writing Begets Writing.'

If you're stuck on a difficult scene, write it anyway.

Write it badly. Write it in verse. Write it as a journal entry, a Dennis Miller rant. If you're frustrated at being stuck, write about that. I don't care. But write.

If you have angry, self-critical feelings, give them to a character in your story. If there isn't a likely candidate, invent one. There IS one, anyway: you. Your anguish, doubt, fears and frustrations are as vital and elemental to what you're writing as any character or plot point. Might as well make use of this fact.

Writing begets writing. Just as worrying begets worrying. Obsessing begets more obsessing. Pacing back and forth begets -- well, you get the idea. [An addition from TNaismith: Kindness begets kindness. ^.^b]

When you risk writing from where you're at, you set in motion a whole set of internal processes. The first rotten sentence you write has a life you can inhabit, evaluate, cross out. This first attempt can be replaced by a second, hopefully less rotten sentence -- maybe a good piece of description or a sharp line of dialogue.

Then again, maybe not. But it doesn't matter. Just keep going. As William Goldman reminds us, some scenes you write are just going to be sludge, but they're important connective tissue. They keep things moving; they're links in a chain. Weak links, perhaps, but you can always go back and strengthen them later.

With what? The knowledge that you've written, for one thing, because writing doesn't just beget writing, it also begets -- and reinforces -- the reality that you can write; that pages will accumulate.

Look at it this way: Every hour you spend writing is an hour NOT spent fretting about your writing. Every day you produce pages is a day you DIDN'T spend sitting at a coffee shop, bitching about not producing any pages.

Writing begets writing. Not writing begets...well...not writing. You do the math.

There you have it: the Three Cosmic Rules of Writing.

1) 'You Are Enough.'
2) 'Work With What You're Given.'
3) 'Writing Begets Writing.'

Which all point to one rule, really. Write now. Don't wait. Write now. And keep writing.

Pass it on.

Formerly a Hollywood screenwriter ('My Favorite Year'), Dennis Palumbo, M.A., MFT, is a licensed psychotherapist specializing in creative issues. He is a regular columnist for the Writers Guild of America, west magazine 'Written By.' His recent book, 'Writing From the Inside Out,' published by John Wiley and Sons, is a favorite at The Writers Store.

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Post by Corn King Tue 08 Jun 2010, 9:09 pm

Nice Very Happy
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Post by DieOrFail Tue 08 Jun 2010, 9:22 pm

Yes, thank you, ENVY and TN for your posts!
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Post by Adam Shootyperson Wed 09 Jun 2010, 5:16 am

Poem is actually epic =D
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Post by Envy Wed 09 Jun 2010, 10:53 pm

D you mean Poetry? that is the plural for all poems. or do you mean My poem is epic. Again thanks for the comments^^
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Post by Adam Shootyperson Thu 10 Jun 2010, 1:34 am

I mean your poem is epic =D
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Post by DieOrFail Thu 10 Jun 2010, 2:55 am

Adam Shootyperson wrote:I mean your poem is epic =D

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